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Out in the World MAG

October 27, 2009
By Jatie PLATINUM, San Francisco, California
Jatie PLATINUM, San Francisco, California
29 articles 2 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Yesterday was to early to be monday.


Out in the wild,
dark mountain rise,
beyond the clouds.

The scent of sea,
merged with smells,
of pine trees.

Dream,
to touch the sea,
feel the foam,
taste the salt,
see the waves,
feel the wind in your hair.

Imagine,
sailing on the sea,
of climbing the mountains,
crossing cities,
and wading through rivers.

Feel the earth,
beneath your feet,
step after step,
see how the world was made.



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doglvr said...
on May. 10 2010 at 7:53 pm

awsome poem

i imagined myself walking through the scene you painted out


on Apr. 30 2010 at 9:36 pm
sparkofheart GOLD, Plymouth, Minnesota
16 articles 2 photos 253 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Always" - Severus Snape

really beautifully written it seems like you wrote it like the broken thoughts someone might have when walking along these scenes. not sure if you meant it like that but thats how i interpreted it! awesome job :)

Jatie PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 25 2010 at 6:34 pm
Jatie PLATINUM, San Francisco, California
29 articles 2 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Yesterday was to early to be monday.

thanks so much! i really didn't think anyone would actually read anything i wrote but i'm glad you think that.

on Jan. 24 2010 at 5:32 pm
writerscramp PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
33 articles 0 photos 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
Anyone who says winning isn&#039;t everything,<br /> Has won nothing.<br /> ``Mia Hamm

This is a very nice poem. no no no it is a very EXCELENT poem. no no no... it is amazing! yes yes the last too. (in mad prof mode. lol)

i like the imagry. you are very talented and i really need a dictionary. OFF TO THE LAB!

lol ne way, great work!