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JJ <3 MAG
October 23, 2009
Small heat – bursts of addiction –
translate touch to passion,
while breath delays, patience is carved into the soul.
a smile – recognition – slinks its way across both faces,
a lazy, lemon-flavored secret to be tucked away
for a night dream.
rain trickles down the classroom window as
his fingers curve, take root, draw circles against her palm.
her heart speeds, matching the rate of the hail outside.
if he's not meticulous with the way he holds her,
she'll shatter.
© Sarah R., Fort Myers, FL
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This article has 9 comments.
Angel_17 said...
on Apr. 22 2011 at 5:29 pm
This was great:) i loved the picture it painted in my head. Check out my stuff if you want:) good work!
The_Girl_Next_Door PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 1 2010 at 8:44 pm
Good :) I'd love to see it.
thank you thank you! :) glad you all liked it. I kept it short for certain reasons - mainly personal. It's hard to write about this guy - he was my first true love, always will be. you know how it goes :P but I'm so glad you like it. I'll revise and add some more for you all!
AndThisIsReal PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 9 2010 at 12:57 pm
Lovely use of language.
Please, feel free to read/ comment my poetry as well. :)
sparkofheart GOLD said...
on Jun. 2 2010 at 7:07 pm
that was fantastic you are an amazing writer...keep it up!
The_Girl_Next_Door PLATINUM said...
on May. 29 2010 at 7:02 pm
Go to submit work and submit your poetry; simple as that :)
The_Girl_Next_Door PLATINUM said...
on May. 28 2010 at 10:00 am
I think you have a way with words. You sound like you have a lot of talent, I only wish you had written more about it :/
You have talent; Don't forget it!
FireWhiskey SILVER said...
on May. 27 2010 at 6:56 pm
pretty good. I wish I new how to get my poetry posted on the site.
