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Was this fun?

November 1, 2009
By Poetic_Mind PLATINUM, West Monroe, New York
Poetic_Mind PLATINUM, West Monroe, New York
23 articles 12 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A woman's heart should be so lost in God, a man needs to seek him in order to find her."
"It is never the end, Just a chance for a new beginning."


Your lies were so beautiful,
they made me breakdown,
I was all your's,
my whole being in your hands.

You out me through a loop,
threw me in the air,
you said you'd catch me,
but you just walked away and let me fall.

why did you have to hurt me,
why was it so important,
why so necessary?

was it just too easy,
too much fun,
ws playing with me,
too easy to pass up?


The author's comments:
Questions I wish I could ask him. everything that runs through my mind when Im thinking about it.

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on Nov. 15 2009 at 8:53 pm
This was a really good poem but you had some spelling and punctuation errors.

kit_kat BRONZE said...
on Nov. 13 2009 at 3:40 pm
kit_kat BRONZE, Glendale, Arizona
4 articles 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened"
-- Dr.Seuss

It's kinda sad, in a good way, if that makes sense. I like it, it's relatable and well-written.

on Nov. 12 2009 at 8:27 pm
kaseyparks PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
22 articles 4 photos 19 comments
cute, i can relate. well-written.

on Nov. 12 2009 at 1:11 am
starsonmysleeves SILVER, San Anselmo, California
7 articles 0 photos 20 comments
i've felt this way so many times. i guess we all go through it. well expressed.

on Nov. 11 2009 at 10:06 am
Hay_Wire PLATINUM, Independence, Missouri
42 articles 0 photos 219 comments
i like it. good metaphors