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Rebirthed

October 29, 2009
By calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
4 articles 0 photos 84 comments

Punctured through thin skinned slates,
as I wonder of my previous past.
Twisted throughout disgrace,
as my lost heart pulses alast.
An open mind unfolds,
as my imagery comes to cast,
A new being,
as a founded heart beats on a polished slate forever more.



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on Mar. 10 2010 at 5:08 pm
CletusTheCool GOLD, Bolingbrook, Illinois
12 articles 6 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Great wisdom always encounters violent opposition from mediocre minds..&quot;<br /> &quot;Evil is always unspectacular. Evil sits at our table. Evil eats our food.&quot;

wow, beautiful.

cutting?

I don't know, that's what it reminds me of.

You really are an amazing writer

on Feb. 26 2010 at 2:23 pm
calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
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Thank you!

on Feb. 25 2010 at 10:46 pm
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
32 articles 0 photos 246 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

This is beautiful!!! I got a little confused for a minute there, but i figured it out!!! GORGEOUS!!!

on Feb. 8 2010 at 2:38 pm
calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
4 articles 0 photos 84 comments
This really means alot to me. I appreciate your positive thoughts.

on Feb. 8 2010 at 2:36 pm
calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
4 articles 0 photos 84 comments
Thank you oh so much!

on Feb. 4 2010 at 5:50 pm
CuteCourt101 SILVER, Newark, Delaware
9 articles 1 photo 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Acting like someone else is a waste of who you are!&quot; ~Unknown

beautiful .. really gets you thinking!!

5 Stars :)

on Feb. 4 2010 at 1:54 pm
MissFaber SILVER, Wayne, New Jersey
5 articles 0 photos 156 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing Less.

wow.... you really versed the idea of tranformation very beautifully in this poem.

on Jan. 15 2010 at 7:10 pm
LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
42 articles 11 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;They say &#039;Life&#039;s two steps forward and one step back&#039; - But what if I tripped and fell down the whole flight of stairs?&quot;

:) Any and every time.

on Jan. 15 2010 at 3:01 pm
calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
4 articles 0 photos 84 comments
Thank you so much. You really encourage me to keep writing. ! This really means alot!

on Jan. 14 2010 at 11:06 am
Peace182 BRONZE, Philadelphia, Tennessee
1 article 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everyone has a dream, but its up to you to make that dream a reality. Life is to short not to.

This is great. I love it, simple yet very meaningful.

on Dec. 7 2009 at 5:52 pm
LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
42 articles 11 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;They say &#039;Life&#039;s two steps forward and one step back&#039; - But what if I tripped and fell down the whole flight of stairs?&quot;

I've fallen in love with your phrases and wording.

on Dec. 7 2009 at 8:32 am
altindiegirl GOLD, Cedar Park, Texas
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This is so beautiful in its simplicity. "Punctured through thin skinned slates..." That's a great intro. Keep up the good work.

on Nov. 22 2009 at 10:41 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Some things will never change&quot;---Tupac

Beautiful. Deep. Strong. Words paint a picture.

on Nov. 19 2009 at 8:40 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
26 articles 0 photos 493 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?&quot; - Mario Pei<br /> &quot;I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn&#039;t, I would die.&quot; Isaac Asimov

This is so powerful, the language just makes you think, and it is really deep! Beautiful!

on Nov. 19 2009 at 7:57 pm
firstsnowfalls DIAMOND, Marcellus, New York
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beautiful and very powerful! great imagery! :)

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on Nov. 19 2009 at 6:22 pm
Cheyenne ELITE, Hephzibah, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
-The brightest future will always be based on the forgotten past<br /> - It takes who you are and where you&#039;ve been to make the person you are today<br /> -As one person I cannot change the world, but I can change the world of one person<br /> -To learn to succeed, you must first learn to fail

that poem is beautiful! It relates to me!