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Anarchy In the Soul

November 10, 2009
By ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
31 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
"only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything."-Tyler Durdan -Fight Club-


Revenge.
Back where I belong, my sweet.
This delicate world, your soul.
Time to create more havoc.
Oh it feels good to rebel once more.
No longer under your control,
No longer under your rules, now I control the game.

Destroy.
A savage plan that seems so justified.
You once put the sun to my face,
My skin burned under the scold of your words.
Now here you are, your soul a sheep in the midst of wolves.
You are scared. I hear it in your voice,
Good.
I was once imprisoned by the government inside of you.
Where is your government to save you now?
It crumbled under the pressure of your doubtful heart.
Now it's my turn to twist like you did mine.

Pain.
Have you ever felt it?
Not like you will.
Time for prayers because I won't hold back.
My chest was soft, now it is vacant.
You were a black hole that I was sucked into,
Now I've let myself go in.
I can give you pain from the inside out.
You will explode.

Mercy.
There will be none.
I have no plan, I just will attack.
I will cause the omega of your soul.

Rebel.
.....................Rebel.
..........Rebel.

..Rebel.



Revenge.

......................Revenge. .
.
..............................Revenge.

You will explode.
Explode..
.......Explode.
I promise it.

I thought I would enjoy this.
Times have changed.
But it will be done anyway,
Go run,
Go hide.
I am a hunter.
A spear will be driven into you.

Revenge is sweet, as heard time and time again.
But my taste buds are gone and I can't taste.
But I must eat if I am too survive.
Which is why you must be devoured.
There is no control here.
Anarchy's in your soul.



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on Jun. 12 2011 at 7:19 pm
SophiaCross SILVER, Plattsburgh, New York
7 articles 3 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love, to be loved. To never forget your own insignificance. To never get used to the unspeakable violence and vulgar disparity of the life around you. To seek joy in the saddest places. To pursue beauty to its lair. To never simplify what is complicated or complicate what is simple. To respect strength, never power. Above all to watch. To try and understand. To never look away. And never, never to forget.”

I find myself continuing to creep on your work. I love this one as well...it's dark. Rather refreshing.

on Oct. 14 2010 at 5:14 pm
ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
31 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
"only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything."-Tyler Durdan -Fight Club-

Oh...sorry then.

on Oct. 13 2010 at 6:24 pm
xenon333 PLATINUM, Billerica, Massachusetts
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well....its all still up there....

on Oct. 12 2010 at 6:58 pm
ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
31 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
"only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything."-Tyler Durdan -Fight Club-

On your profile it only shows your favorite work by others.

on Oct. 12 2010 at 1:42 pm
xenon333 PLATINUM, Billerica, Massachusetts
42 articles 0 photos 150 comments
....what??

on Oct. 11 2010 at 8:04 pm
ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
31 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
"only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything."-Tyler Durdan -Fight Club-

why'd you delete all of your work, Xenon?

on Mar. 26 2010 at 2:59 pm
ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
31 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
"only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything."-Tyler Durdan -Fight Club-

thank you.

kysh15 said...
on Mar. 25 2010 at 9:49 pm
kysh15, Edmonds, Washington
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i loved this! is was so powerful and full of feeling!

on Jan. 24 2010 at 8:15 pm
xenon333 PLATINUM, Billerica, Massachusetts
42 articles 0 photos 150 comments
my favorite part was the revenge part :) very good. Angry, for lack of a better word. Powerful.

on Jan. 2 2010 at 12:38 pm
ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
31 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
"only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything."-Tyler Durdan -Fight Club-

okay. thanks.

on Jan. 1 2010 at 9:58 am
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
30 articles 0 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, 'I have always thought that but never found the words for it.'" -anonymous

Ok, uh, I'll change my wording... unique. Don't get me wrong it was good; just... different.

on Dec. 31 2009 at 5:52 pm
ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
31 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
"only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything."-Tyler Durdan -Fight Club-

Thanks for calling my work bizzare.

on Dec. 31 2009 at 5:50 pm
ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
31 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
"only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything."-Tyler Durdan -Fight Club-

What's wrong with it?

on Dec. 30 2009 at 10:28 am
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
30 articles 0 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, 'I have always thought that but never found the words for it.'" -anonymous

Uh.... this is bizarre... to say the least....uh... interesting.... i think while i was reading i registered you were a good writer, but mainly i was thinking, "what the heck?"