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Forever Ago

November 29, 2009
By truelove4ever222 SILVER, Crosby, Texas
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truelove4ever222 SILVER, Crosby, Texas
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Daughters of jerusalem, I charge you by the does and gazelles of the field; Do not arouse or awaken love until it so desires. -Song of Songs 2:7

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Forever ago I favored you as my mother;
I was naiive then.
Forever ago I spoke of happier days;
Monotony fills my life.
I wonder if you care about what you did to me.
I can't know everything,
So the courts say.
Forever ago I couldn't wait to see you those four hours
Every other Saturday;
Forever ago I respected you.
Now I have this pain that won't heal.
I know more than you think, Mom
But I can't let it go.
Forever ago I loved you--
And I still do.
Forever ago I thouht you loved me too...
But that was
Forever ago

© Ezekiel R.

The author's comments:
My life has been blessed but there are some dark places that like to creep out, exspressing the pain I feel.
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Let-it-rain-to-hide-my-tears SILVER said...
on Dec. 22 2009 at 6:08 pm
Let-it-rain-to-hide-my-tears SILVER, Fort Worth, Texas
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Live without regrets

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wowiknow how tht feels some times the pain is too great
Briana Marie BRONZE said...
on Dec. 22 2009 at 12:05 pm
Briana Marie BRONZE, Miami, Florida
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I feel this way too, though I love her still.
truelove4ever222 SILVER said...
on Dec. 18 2009 at 8:49 pm
truelove4ever222 SILVER, Crosby, Texas
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I just wrote what was coming from my heart. And to clarify things- I do still love my mother.
mylee-ritesz BRONZE said...
on Dec. 17 2009 at 2:37 pm
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This is really good. I like this one... a lot
xXsmileXx PLATINUM said...
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I like this poem, and i can really connect with it. I've written a couple poems about my mom that weren't so sweet. I think you did a great job =]
Vylet.Mxoxoxo said...
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Really good x
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That was intense, I really liked it, I actually kind of hate when people say this but I can kind of relate
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This is really good.