Silence | Teen Ink


December 9, 2009
By Soft_spoken GOLD, Houston, Texas
Soft_spoken GOLD, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
if your feelings go away its not love
if that person
leaves an imprint on your heart that was love
only once
only one guy left a imprint on my heart like that i love him still -BY ME BRITTANY JENELLE

I take steps back
time stops what do you think of that
you stand right and front of me
its not you moving
its only me
me staring at you
but you cannot tell
you dont blink nothing at all
so you wont ever know how your voice runs through my mind
and i think of you all the time
but there is silence
nothing around i grab your hand and smile
hoping it will stay like this for awhile
but i wake up
i day dream its true and i always think of you
just you
if there was only silence

The author's comments:
the picture inspired me lol
but i wrote this poem in like 5 minutes lol so yea not my best

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on Apr. 13 2010 at 11:17 am
meganleigh122 GOLD, Greeneville, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass... It's about learning to dance in the rain."

this is really good :) your words flowed pretty well and it's a poem people can relate to :) keep it up. can you check out my stuff??

on Apr. 13 2010 at 7:00 am
Jenna4Jesus BRONZE, New Brunswick, North Carolina
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Hm..that was really interesting! I liked it! check out my stuff, i think you might like it too. :)

kysh15 said...
on Mar. 22 2010 at 10:15 pm
kysh15, Edmonds, Washington
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this is really good!

on Mar. 22 2010 at 3:48 pm
Whisperer PLATINUM, O&#39Fallon, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
I'd rather be hated for who i am, than loved for who I'm not~Anonymous

No individual has any right to come into and out of this world without leaving distinct and legit reasons for having passed through.~Anonymous

this is really good. i can kind of relate to this. thank you :)

Ale_18 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 22 2010 at 2:24 pm
Ale_18 BRONZE, Monte Vista, Colorado
3 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
A dying man needs to die, as a sleepy man needs to sleep, and there comes a time when it is wrong, as well as useless, to resist.

i liked it:) u did a good job