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Mindless without me?

December 18, 2009
By Breee GOLD, Salina, Kansas
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Breee GOLD, Salina, Kansas
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"If you really love someone, you shouldnt have to work at it."
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Your mindless without me,
and yet you won't fight.
So i guess it's not ment to be,
if you don't think it's right.
Their not the only one,
and i know it's not me.
Life is a virtue,
so let us be free.
Get all the weight off your shoulders,
because i know it's a ton.
Don't be discouraged,
this battle will be won..

© Rebecca S., Coventry, RI

The author's comments:
I wrote this when i got mad at my friend... and he really likes me but the only thing holding US back is his mom and my friends...
I dont care about what they say at all... its just him.

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