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My Heart Will Still Beat

December 29, 2009
By LoveBam14 BRONZE, Bakersfield, California
LoveBam14 BRONZE, Bakersfield, California
3 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you stand for nothing, you'll fall for anything.


On the outside i'm smiling
but on the inside i'm dying,
As you walk by,
my heart begins to cry

I say I don't need you
I wish what I say was true,

It's hard to live with only half a heart,
Don't worry,
i'll find a new guy,
with a new start

It won't be easy,
i'm not saying that,
you'll always be in my heart,
and that's a fact

Regrets, Regrets,
So many I have...
just thinking about it makes me sad

I thought you made my heart complete,
but know that you're gone,
It's still gonna beat <3



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Babyjane said...
on Apr. 30 2010 at 10:51 am
I like the way you xpress the mood of a heartac.he  Its true, the first cut is always the deepest, but time will heal.  Keep writing Hallmark could use you.!

on Feb. 6 2010 at 3:33 am
LoveBam14 BRONZE, Bakersfield, California
3 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you stand for nothing, you'll fall for anything.

Aw thanks, i appreciate the advice :)

on Jan. 30 2010 at 4:03 pm
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I really like the theme of this poem, and I adore the last line. the beginning, however, is a little.. common. if you know what I mena by that. I feel like i've heard it before. that doesn't make it less pretty, but it just doesn't stand out in my memory. however, the last line will stick with me.