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Thunderstorm
January 11, 2010
Thunder crash,
Lightening flash,
Iluminates the skies.
Comstant beat of the rain,
Wistling wind hollowing through the trees.
Clouds clash and lightening flash,
House lights flicker: tink, tink.
My heart pounds in my ears: boo boom, boo boom.
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rachelggggggg BRONZE said...
on Jan. 25 2010 at 12:58 am
Wow I really like the rhythm of the first two lines! drew me in :)
CountryGothic GOLD said...
on Jan. 24 2010 at 7:50 pm
Well, it is mostly descriptive in short sparks. It could flow a little bit better. But even so, it's rather good.
thanks for your words :) they mean alot. i actually wasn't expecting this peice to get on the internet so thats why there are spelling mistakes. i am definitly not pleased with them but i can't change them. oh well, but i'm glad that you liked it :)
AbbotRabbit GOLD said...
on Jan. 22 2010 at 2:53 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx
CountryGothic GOLD said...
on Jan. 22 2010 at 6:40 am
I like the poem, it's pretty good, but could be more.
MCGlowstick SILVER said...
on Jan. 21 2010 at 12:57 pm
suspenseful fast action fun descriptives
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