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Being

January 11, 2010
By hBaAnNnAaNhA BRONZE, West Newbury, Massachusetts
hBaAnNnAaNhA BRONZE, West Newbury, Massachusetts
3 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live the life you choose, not the life you're told.


A thousand people haunt this world
Living, breathing, in synchronized harmony,
Their starry hearts beating as one.
Life flickers by like an old film,
Captured in moments,
Ones that stand out shining like sweetness
And others that weigh as much as devastated dreams.
A thousand people haunt this world,
Ghosts of a thousand different shades
Watching a thousand different lives they left behind
Play out and unfold from the secretive depths
Of a thousand different souls buried deep.
A thousand people haunt this world,
The world in which I am.
So many people, so many ghosts
Dwell here in this land of sun and moon,
Earth and sky and ocean depths.
I am being, being so,
And I live too brightly sometimes,
I shatter into shards of shining scintillation,
A combustion of happiness
And I am no more thought, only feeling.
And I live too darkly sometimes,
I feel a fissure along my right ribs
That rips my heart from its cavity in my chest
And I am no more thought, only feeling.
A thousand people haunt this world,
A thousand starry hearts beating as one.
A thousand people haunt this world,
Today, the number’s down by one.


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on Mar. 12 2010 at 9:20 pm
RuRuTheLoVeGuRu GOLD, Valley Stream, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Life is like a rose, it was meant to have its thorns....

I really like it! It paints a picture in your mind! Very creative! =D

on Jan. 24 2010 at 2:19 pm
EzriaRose SILVER, San Leandro, California
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very well written, nice imagery, and i like the wording. keep it up!

on Jan. 23 2010 at 10:49 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Very well written.

It seems a little dark,

but thats what pulls me into reading this.

keep writing dear!

on Jan. 23 2010 at 6:19 pm
sydelle PLATINUM, Estacada, Oregon
26 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And I fear not what man can do; for perfect love casteth out all fear..."

this has a tremendous deal of depth to it.

you have an amazing talent for description, keep it up =]]

on Jan. 21 2010 at 7:37 pm
WriterWannaBe PLATINUM, Somers Point, New Jersey
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I love the title.

on Jan. 21 2010 at 2:52 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.<br /> I really enjoyed it.<br /> Lovely poem darling =]<br /> -Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-<br /> XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

tayyy<3 said...
on Jan. 21 2010 at 2:21 pm
kind of confusing at first, but i like it. keep writign!