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Carton Confession

January 7, 2010
By ajibike PLATINUM, Monroe, Louisiana
ajibike PLATINUM, Monroe, Louisiana
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I’ll admit that I downed
the orange juice,
fresh squeezed and chilled
from the carton.

And I’ll admit that I knew
the orange juice,
fresh squeezed and chilled
would be served at family breakfast.

But I’ll admit that I finished
the orange juice,
fresh squeezed and chilled
because there wasn’t any apple.



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on Jan. 24 2010 at 9:07 pm
ajibike PLATINUM, Monroe, Louisiana
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Aha! Thank you so much.

on Jan. 24 2010 at 8:43 pm
I really like this one. (: It reminds me of my boyfriend, who just so happens to be addicted to Orange Juice, and just in general, several different aspects of this poem appeal to me... I like it a lot. (: Nice work.

on Jan. 22 2010 at 10:25 pm
ajibike PLATINUM, Monroe, Louisiana
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Any feedback would be sublime.