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What went wrong?

January 2, 2010
By kayx3ftw PLATINUM, Woodbridge, New Jersey
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kayx3ftw PLATINUM, Woodbridge, New Jersey
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"You don't get another chance, Life is no Nintendo game"- Eminem

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I’m lost in fear,
When your not there.
The feelings gone but,
What went wrong?
I have no clue what to do…
My biggest problem is
You…
Guide me through,
Until the end.
Be my partner in crime…
My one best friend.

© Erica P., Wolfforth, TX

The author's comments:
I wrote this beucause i stopped having the same feelings for my boyfriend. it was weird.. and i really didnt understand why it happened.. so hope you enjoy. and feel the emotion behind it.
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