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Goodbye

January 23, 2010
By kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
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kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
12 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop."

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I can't deal
with the happiness
when inside
I'm a total mess

There is no compromise
when your happiness
brings tears to my eyes

You made your choice
thats fine
I've made mine...

Goodbye

© Tabatha B., Peoria, IL

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wild18 SILVER said...
on Jul. 31 2010 at 3:57 pm
wild18 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 49 comments

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Forget about the people in your past theres a reason they didn&#039;t make it to your future.

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so short & simple & yet, you get straight to the point. I loved it! 
ShenelleCrystal SILVER said...
on Jun. 17 2010 at 8:32 pm
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
7 articles 0 photos 186 comments

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Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] &hearts;

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That was soooo good ! Don't stop writing your so good :) Come check out my poems , thank youu :)
CourtneyRenee GOLD said...
on Apr. 4 2010 at 10:40 pm
CourtneyRenee GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 6 comments

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&quot;..Paper people in their paper towns burning paper just to try and stay warm for the future..&quot;<br /> Paper towns by John Green

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This one is yet another well put-together piece. I, like Cody, had to make the same decision. And I, like you, love when people can relate to my work. Good job and good luck.
kenna2013 GOLD said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 4:12 pm
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
12 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop.&quot;

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Thank you very much and i might have to try it and see how it goes :)
RenaissanceMan SILVER said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 8:23 am
RenaissanceMan SILVER, Westland, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
I was born. It was born. So it began. It continues. It will outlive me. People whisper, stare, giggle. Their eternal privilege. My eternal curse-Joyce Carol Oates

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Just curious. It seems as if you may be good at writing stories. Your poems are stories in themselves. It would be interesting to see how they can develop into something bigger and possibly even better
kenna2013 GOLD said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 5:11 am
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
12 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop.&quot;

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No i havent actually Why?
RenaissanceMan SILVER said...
on Mar. 31 2010 at 11:34 pm
RenaissanceMan SILVER, Westland, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
I was born. It was born. So it began. It continues. It will outlive me. People whisper, stare, giggle. Their eternal privilege. My eternal curse-Joyce Carol Oates

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Ah, brevity is sweet. Lol good work in such a brief passage. Have you ever considered writing beyond poetry?
kenna2013 GOLD said...
on Mar. 16 2010 at 8:57 pm
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
12 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop.&quot;

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Thank you so much. As a writer it means so much to me to know that some1 is capable of relating to my work :)
CodyBalls GOLD said...
on Mar. 16 2010 at 2:20 pm
CodyBalls GOLD, Richmond, Missouri
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I like it very well written. What got me the most was that i could releate to the situation at hand and it brought to my mind a similar choice I'd had to make.
brysmarie12 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 31 2010 at 3:46 pm
brysmarie12 PLATINUM, Neoga, Illinois
22 articles 1 photo 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am the author of my own life... unfortunately I&#039;m writing in pen and can&#039;t erase my mistakes.

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This is very good! :) Keep up the good work!
kenna2013 GOLD said...
on Jan. 27 2010 at 7:21 pm
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
12 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop.&quot;

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Feel free to comment and tell me what you think about it... criticsim is the only way i can learn....so please help me learn!