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The Wedding MAG

By Anonymous

The Procession began – I walked
down first – the Shoes clacking
with each Step – I stopped on
the Marker – the fellow Maids
followed – along with the Bride –
Do You take – the Strap pinched –
my Heel ached – that unnecessary
little Toe throbbed – I do –
how long is this Speech – I do –
The Train chugged outside – Pictures
on the beach – I knew a Blister
was coming – the happy Couple smiled –
then it was the Group’s turn – Me –
Hike back to the hall – the Pair
now One – to dance and celebrate –
the Buckle undone on the left –
now the right – wanna Dance?



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on May. 12 2009 at 2:13 pm
Malarie Dean BRONZE, Smithville, Mississippi
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I love this one!!! It is so funny, cuz that is exactly how I imagine every bride feels!!!!

on May. 1 2009 at 2:40 am
very nice. u should lenghten it.

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on Apr. 29 2009 at 12:05 am
mmfdg623 GOLD, Lyndhurst, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Far away in the sunshine are my highest aspirations. I may not reach them, but I can look up and see their beauty, believe in them, and try to follow where they lead.<br /> Louisa May Alcott

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on Apr. 28 2009 at 8:17 pm
this is kind of good if you know wat i mean i mean its good in a weird kind of way but also in a sad kind of way. bye bye tina rox

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on Apr. 28 2009 at 6:51 pm
Catlady SILVER, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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That is so good. amazing I never been in a wedding. you made it short and sweet.

on Apr. 13 2009 at 9:04 pm
Cassie PLATINUM, Delisle, Other
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I really enjoyed this one. Good job!

on Apr. 12 2009 at 10:14 pm
annkaykay2011 DIAMOND, Lansing, Michigan
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&quot;I am who I am, sorry, no changes.&quot;

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on Jan. 18 2009 at 11:59 pm
SO COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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