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The Rain

January 28, 2010
By AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.


The rain,
It falls upon my face
Blending with my tears,

The tears,
That fall,
Are for you,

But you will never care,
You will never glance my way,
And see how much I want,
for your smile to be for me,
Instead of someone else,

The storm it rages on,
And yet I feel no cold,
Nor can I ever really feel the sun,

The numbness,
overtakes me,
Just when I think I'm fine,
And so it will be,
That I am right here,
And as you are passing by,

You will not look into my eyes,
For you know what you will see,
The misery,
That is killing me,
And slowly,
Oh so slowly,

My heart is hardening,
So that one day,
When you do want me,
It is you I will not see.


The author's comments:
tragic story boy meets girl, girl falls for boy,boy doesn't know i'm alive.. so i moved on!

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on Feb. 17 2010 at 5:32 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

Thank you!!!

Eskimo K said...
on Feb. 17 2010 at 4:53 pm
You have certainly been Blessed with a gift of writing.

on Feb. 15 2010 at 1:52 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

Oh, well thats cool too. And i agree that reading poetry is just as fun.

animalfreak said...
on Feb. 15 2010 at 1:03 pm
no i don't. i like to admire the beauty of writing then write it myself.

on Feb. 15 2010 at 12:51 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

Sounds good to me! Do you have any poems on this site?

animalfreak said...
on Feb. 15 2010 at 12:47 pm
Can't wait! when there are posted expect some comments from me. ok. so far so good.

on Feb. 15 2010 at 12:43 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

Thank you again, and there should be some new stuff soon...

animalfreak said...
on Feb. 15 2010 at 12:39 pm
You are welcome. it is important for people to get praise on what they do well so they will continue with it. once again you are an amazing writter. i hope you continue with writing. can't wait to see more of your work!

on Feb. 15 2010 at 12:33 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

Thank you so much!

animalfreak said...
on Feb. 15 2010 at 12:25 pm
This is amazing! keep writing and you will go far!