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The truth

January 29, 2010
By bilbogirl GOLD, Townsend, Delaware
bilbogirl GOLD, Townsend, Delaware
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Favorite Quote:
If you cant rock it, dont even bother trying.


The truth is
I need you
The truth is
I love you
The truth is
I don't want to lose you
I cant lose you
I want your love
I crave it
But i cant admit it
Because then everyone would know
My secret.
Shhhhh, they dont know.
Its just my secret.
A terrible secret of my own.



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on Apr. 3 2010 at 11:38 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

You're Welcome :)

bilbogirl GOLD said...
on Apr. 3 2010 at 8:35 am
bilbogirl GOLD, Townsend, Delaware
19 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you cant rock it, dont even bother trying.

okay, thank you so much for your feedback. Now i know what i need to work on! thanks again :)

on Apr. 2 2010 at 10:22 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

This was okay...I think if you refrain "the truth is" at the beginning of the poem, you should continue to refrain til the end. unless you could make a powerful transition without losing the meaning.