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Deppression

January 30, 2010
By hollyhottell DIAMOND, Redding, California
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poetry is a diary written out loud

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depression is a feeling
a great pain inside
all your layers are peeling
even happiness and pride
you succumb to the darkness
the light is just to bright
you havnt got a harrness
on why you want to cry
theres easy ways to fix it
none of which are safe
you dont know why you feel it
now your bodies like a cave
your feelings have you surrounded
and by then you were trapped
then everything just darkend
and there was no going back

© Harold S., Goodyear, AZ

The author's comments:
lately alot of bad stuff keeps happening in my life. i just felt a little down in the dumps if you know what i mean. I know that poetry helps me get my feelings out and i dont like writing them down in a diary. to me poetry is like a diary written out loud. I know i cant be the only one who gets deppressed sometimes and i know that if people dont feel like there alone, that right there is a big help. i just hope other people can feel like they relate to someone or something and dont feel so alone anymore. Because beleive me your not.
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CaptainFabulous. GOLD said...
on Feb. 14 2010 at 5:54 pm
CaptainFabulous. GOLD, Union, Missouri
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the more i read your workk the more i feel like i can relate

this is just so good

i love in your comments how you say poetry is a diary written out loud

i totaly agree

great job