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Take my hand
February 7, 2010
I took your hand.
Did exactly what you said;close your eyes, hold on tight.Put one foot out.And let go.Jumped.The rushing air in my face.My heart beating in my chest.Life is running by with every heart beat.I think I'm about to die.Wait, I think I am living for the first time.Can I freeze this moment? I want to have this feeling forever. It's phenomenal. It's like nothing matters but life. For once I feel like I don't care what people say, or feel about me. I want this for forever.
© Hilary L., Rogers City, MI
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ShadowOfaGirl GOLD said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 12:57 pm
i'm a big fan of all your poems.
this one is amazing. my fav line is when u said u felt like u were going to die, wait i think im living for the first time. keep writing, i want to read more of your poems
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