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She Will Fly

February 14, 2010
By RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship


The beautiful sound of wings, sifting through a spell binding wind.
These wings did not always exist. They grew seemingly overnight
They belong to a girl who once had no hope. She was terrified.
Every day was a nightmare for her. But now, with unmistakable faith she flies in a new light.
You can still faintly see her scars, but they do not bind her to the surface of the earth.



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on Jun. 27 2011 at 10:02 pm
shoelessjoe GOLD, Highland, Michigan
19 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't tell me the sky's the limit when ther are footsteps on the moon"
"Instead of waiting for the storm to pass, learn to dance in the rain"
"The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams"

it's beautiful :) i love in the end where it says the thing about the scars, but they "don't bind her to the surface of the Earth." (or whatever it was, i think that was close)

on Nov. 17 2010 at 12:22 am
Healing_Angel SILVER, Sydney, Other
8 articles 2 photos 509 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live for today, not for tomorrow

I can imagine a bird flying away from it's bonds as light as a feather. Your work is so powerful.... Every word burns with emotion. This is beautiful just the way it s.  

on Sep. 12 2010 at 3:12 pm
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

Yes, it is. Thank you.

on Sep. 8 2010 at 6:23 am
OldSpeckledHen BRONZE, Sunderland, Other
3 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sleep is the best medidation.

I like this, I really do. I hope that the wings are a metaphor for hope, because that's what I'm getting for it.

 

Well done.


on Jul. 21 2010 at 5:10 pm
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

Shweet, thanks.

on Jul. 21 2010 at 4:42 pm
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM, Union, Missouri
36 articles 0 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return." -MOULIN ROUGE (song lyrics)

interesting, very nice

on Jul. 17 2010 at 6:36 pm
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

Thanks. I wanted to change it up a bit instead of the morbid dark poems I right all the time lol

on Jul. 15 2010 at 4:21 pm
Just.A.Dream SILVER, Lake Geneva, Wisconsin
7 articles 0 photos 430 comments

Favorite Quote:
Part of the J7X team. :)

This poem gives me hope. :) It sends a really good message, I love it!

on Jun. 16 2010 at 12:29 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

It was inspiring:) good job

on May. 29 2010 at 7:06 am
once_a_redhead SILVER, Lady Lake, Florida
9 articles 0 photos 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love is somethin' we all feel even if we don't know that we do!!"

yes its B-E-A Utiful!! and inspring made my day!!

on May. 23 2010 at 9:45 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1979 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

aww that made me smile!! :) beautiful work!!