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Illusion

February 15, 2010
By loveisblind GOLD, Tenino, Washington
loveisblind GOLD, Tenino, Washington
10 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
This world, it ends as you believe it to end; yet it'll live on to the actuall end, where then you admit yourself wrong.


~Me~


Young and beautiful,
old and wise,
Gentle and naive.
Simple human traits.

Yet, all is just an illusion.

Young may we be,
Beautiful are we,
Yet we have no wings to fly.

Yet, all is just an illusion.

Old is the great,
Wise do we see,
Yet, no one is perfect.

Yet, all is just an illusion.

Gentle is the mothers touch,
Naive is the newbie,
Yet, they know little more than we do.



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on Nov. 13 2011 at 8:41 pm
Musicalartist, Xxxxx, Other
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so short, but so meaningful!

I love all your writing, you are very talented!

(oh, and if possible, can you check out my work?)

~Max <3


on Sep. 11 2010 at 3:11 pm
loveisblind GOLD, Tenino, Washington
10 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
This world, it ends as you believe it to end; yet it'll live on to the actuall end, where then you admit yourself wrong.


~Me~

Thank you Leona95 so much.

on Sep. 11 2010 at 3:10 pm
loveisblind GOLD, Tenino, Washington
10 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
This world, it ends as you believe it to end; yet it'll live on to the actuall end, where then you admit yourself wrong.


~Me~

thank you elfiewrites. will do

(sorry it took me a while 2 respond i havent been on alot lately)


on Jun. 2 2010 at 4:48 pm
RosyOptimism DIAMOND, Coronado, California
72 articles 31 photos 57 comments
This is amazing! The poem is so concise, but has so much meaning. I really love your work. You are a very talented writer. 

on Apr. 9 2010 at 5:31 pm
elfiewrites BRONZE, Hillsdale, New Jersey
3 articles 0 photos 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The seat of knowledge is in the head, of wisdom, in the heart."~William Hazlitt
"Be yourself, everyone else is taken."

Excellent! You are a very talented writer!!! If you get the chance, may you please comment on my article "Is There Reason?" Thanks very much. 

on Apr. 2 2010 at 2:41 pm
loveisblind GOLD, Tenino, Washington
10 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
This world, it ends as you believe it to end; yet it'll live on to the actuall end, where then you admit yourself wrong.


~Me~

Thank you ZAVERY. I'm glad you enjoyed it :).

_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 4:46 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 463 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.


–Golly (Harriet The Spy)

The thing I have to admit that I loved was the picture you chose. Very good choice. One thousand stars! * + 9,999 more stars.