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A Better Dawn

February 16, 2010
By theAquarian GOLD, Wethersfield, Connecticut
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I stood before a better dawn,
Wondering if fearing this
Should chance our fallen song.

Cruelly, summer's sailing on
Into a bitter, storming drift.
Crying over why and if,
My last sun can't rise long.

© Tanner H., Kaysville, UT

The author's comments:
I actually created this with limited words- like one of those fridge magnet things with various words everywhere.
I just pieced it together, and actually loved the outcome.
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