Broken | Teen Ink


February 22, 2010
By HPGGMRAR GOLD, Kennesaw, Georgia
HPGGMRAR GOLD, Kennesaw, Georgia
14 articles 6 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I musn't forget I'm alive."
Ray Bradbury (Dandelion Wine)

The Loud Silence
Barren Chaos
Ethereal Reality
Bleak Desolation

The Dawning realization
That it's over

It's over
And were left behind

Left to
Pick up the
Broken pieces
Of a Broken Nation

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Sarahnade GOLD said...
on May. 18 2010 at 5:26 pm
Sarahnade GOLD, Bella Vista, Arkansas
15 articles 3 photos 10 comments
This is good, but it reminds me of "Left Behind" the movies. It's very unique though. And I love the structure of course.

on May. 11 2010 at 6:30 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
What the front door.

this is deep and heavy and uplifting at the samt tine. i wanna start a riot. thank you captain, 5 stars.

Lonleydandy said...
on Mar. 28 2010 at 8:57 pm
I kinda like this one!