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SkyDiving

February 26, 2010
By CreativeScript PLATINUM, Port Hardy, Other
CreativeScript PLATINUM, Port Hardy, Other
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Skydiving,
It is a big fear to me but enhances the exhiliration,
Now I am diving,falling,descending,
My petrified heart fell deep in my chest,
As the wind blew every strand of hair upwards,
Presenting me with a thrill..
I am not afraid, I will triumph, conquer, and win the fight with the fear that is,

Skydiving

The author's comments:
I have always been a fan of Sky-diving, but never got a chance to do it. And everytime I think about doing it, I find myself debating with me, myself, and I.
This poem is a base of 3 main things: Fighting your fears, Taking a chance, and Believing.
I hope it inspired you to reach for the stars!
Thank you,
Alia.

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on Apr. 19 2010 at 11:47 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

I read something and saw your comment that said read my stuff and give me constructive criticism and nice comments. I'm not going to give you too much criticism cause I might not know what I'm talking about. but I'll read all of your stuuff and I'll be honest:) I think it's good that you can write about something so meaningless(to me)-and give it so much imagery and emotion.

on Apr. 12 2010 at 5:56 am
Dunkelheitstieg BRONZE, Baldwin, Florida
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"The poet ranks far below the painter in the representation of visible things, and far below the musician in that of invisible things. Why does the eye see a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination when awake?,"Leonardo da Vinci.

It did inspire me to reach to the stars!:) Also I love how when you write poetry it all flows together.