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Love So True

February 26, 2010
By PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
32 articles 0 photos 246 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..


I lie here,
and think of you.
Your lips whisper my name.
You've moved on,
But I'm still stuck
in our memory.
So are you,
I know undoubtedly.
"Get a life
and forget about him."
That's what I'm told.
But you still hold
my heart so dear.
A love so true,
closer to you
than I ever knew.
One ook,
and you took
my heart with no regret.
Your eyes found mine,
no problem is set
upon our love meeting,
There is no end.
Hardship you give generously,
as I try to overcome
your generosity.
Once again,
I hear you say
my name loudly.
I must be imaginging
everything being heard.
I look around,
but you aren't near.
I must be
having a bad day.
Anytime I see
your entrancing face,
I start to miss
those special days.
It sends me in
too a lasting depression.
You take
my breath away
when you walk by.
I see you,
and I want to cry.
You were
my love,
my life.
Time is precious
with you forever,
I swear.
A bit louder,
I hear your voice.
You still hide
every choice,
every eye
among our memories.
I want you back,
and you say "No."
Why,
I have no clue.
Credit is due
to your love revenue.
Choices are made,
and all is great.
I lay here
every night.
Every now and then,
I cry my eyes out
over the one and only you!
I still love you,
and yes,
feelings are held.
Over you barely,
but love you,
never rarely.
A lie
was never shed,
but you were heartless.
I don't care,
love is still yours.
Wheneverr you look
behind you,
You'll see me
in your past days.
I've said it once,
and I'll say it again.
My love for you
will never end.
You try your hardest
to have me banished
from your life.
No success.
I want to caress
your love so deep
withing my soul.
I hear once more
the voice I adore.
You whisper my name,
and I awake
to find you right beside me
For ever and Always!!!!



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on Mar. 10 2010 at 4:36 pm
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
32 articles 0 photos 246 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

Thanks abunch!!! im sure you write just as well!! %))

on Mar. 10 2010 at 2:51 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

omg lol i luvv this. obviously ive checked out alot of ur work;)) & just luvv it. ur really talentedd