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her mask

March 3, 2010
By woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."


she wore a mask
and every time she wore that mask
it made her an Evil Manito
and an untamed beast
it made her
bring hell upon earth
bring darkness
bring elimination
bring termination
bring obsession
and it made her
murder every good thing about me
it made her
take away my sanity
i was determined
to put her out for good
so i followed her
to the horizon
i waited until
she started taking off
her mask
then
i rose from the water and stabbed her
right in the heart
with a sword
as her mask was floating
and she was sinking
i asked for forgiveness
but suddenly i noticed
something about her face
it was very familiar
then i recognized
that it was exactly
my face
and she was just
my reflection in the water.....



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on May. 13 2010 at 10:35 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
19 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

omg lol im sorry

on May. 13 2010 at 10:27 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Get, Got, Gotten.

youre just like the person in my poem-you missed the point. IM A WOMAN.-it sjust sorta hard to tell if you look at me from the right angle. you can still call me david....

on May. 13 2010 at 10:16 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
19 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

actually i call all my guy friends david lol....i just almost never use their real names lol

on May. 13 2010 at 10:14 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
19 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

omg im sorry...i'll call u david thats one of my favorite names lol

on May. 13 2010 at 9:35 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

sir=mam-but not really. I'm a little manish........

on May. 13 2010 at 9:32 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

actually yes, I was stalking you. I did go throughyour stuff in the same day-(hour). (-you must be a people person.) what you wrote made sense.it was great. i meant what i said didnt make any sense-it never does.

on May. 13 2010 at 9:26 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
19 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

omg thank u...none of my work makes any sense lol.....btw r u stalking me or something? lol going thru my stuff all in one day...lol im just kidding i cant thank u enough for wasting ur time to read my work...thank sir

on May. 11 2010 at 4:57 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

I can relate to this, I had a conflict with my reflection once. its like you bring the same concept but in a different way each time. I dont know if that makes any sense...5 stars captain..no, it doesnt make any sense......

on Apr. 26 2010 at 10:52 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
19 articles 0 photos 106 comments

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"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

........^_^......

on Apr. 26 2010 at 6:54 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
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Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

Of course I like it! And why wouldnt I???? Its brilliant!!!!! (:

on Apr. 25 2010 at 2:44 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
19 articles 0 photos 106 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

omg thank you very much for liking it <3

on Apr. 25 2010 at 1:40 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

Very powerful, and well written... I really like it!