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March 18, 2010
By vintagevampire22 BRONZE, Katy, Texas
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vintagevampire22 BRONZE, Katy, Texas
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Perfect isn't always pretty.

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My love lives for one
the one whose eyes shine
green as new grass
whose skin is bronzed
by the summer sky
the one whose hands caress
softer than a gentle rain
whose love never ends
like the warmth of our skin
the one who doesn't care
about the little imperfections

© Rachel B., Rome, NY

The author's comments:
I went to Mary Jo Peckem Park and when I walked around the pond I heard this guy playing the gutiar and singing.His song just melted by heart and made my bones shake.You can not even believe how much I wanted to just kick of my shoes and dance to that lovley rythym of his guitar and his lilting voice. That song left a mark on my heart and I wanted to describe how his song touched my soul by writing a poem that matched the regal beuaty of his song.
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