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March 15, 2010
By XXXXXShIaNeNeIsMeXXXXX SILVER, Rio Rancho, New Mexico
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XXXXXShIaNeNeIsMeXXXXX SILVER, Rio Rancho, New Mexico
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"love is complicated but wonderful"

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You told me you loved me then broke me
while my heart was getting put back you madeit fall
i thought you loved me like you used to but i was wrong
"im sorry but we cant be together" were you lastwords love sucks but we have ti go through it <3

© Josie G., Wilmot, SD

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I wrote this because my boyfriend left me for a girl he didn't know. I hope girls will understand that they will get there heart broken but they have to stay strong
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ForeverFelix PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 13 2010 at 7:51 pm
ForeverFelix PLATINUM, Catasauqua, Pennsylvania
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Daydreams can be worse than nightmares, but that never stops me.

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I agree with boosflash, but it was not bad, however it would be better if you added a little more substance and a little something...different, you know? Keep writing! =)
Just.A.Dream SILVER said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 7:38 pm
Just.A.Dream SILVER, Lake Geneva, Wisconsin
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Part of the J7X team. :)

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This is so true, especially the last two lines. And I agree with your side comment.
OfficialApprover PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 7:29 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
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I liked this. I agree you could have stated it a bit better, but it was still a good poem, pretty good flow, I like the message.  Good job.
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 7:28 pm
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the ending line's so true...good workk
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on May. 7 2010 at 9:26 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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you said comment on your work so here goes the monkey---this sounds like alot of other stuff i've read on teeink-"you said you loved me but you didnt you broke my heart and now i'm hurt. but we have to go through it".-not very poetic. sob stories-not poetry. you need a creative way to portray your emotions in a poetic form so the reader doesnt go-"just another sob story". my humble honest fluffy opinion.