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Victim
March 22, 2010
Hidden in the darkness
Heart as cold as ice
Waiting for a hero
Everything has its price
Rejected by society
Victim of their hate
Far beyond their mercy
Kindness comes too late
© Asia B., Hudson, MA
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This article has 32 comments.
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Oct. 21 2010 at 10:07 pm
THANK YOU!!:)
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Sep. 17 2010 at 9:59 pm
Thank you Kal:)
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Sep. 6 2010 at 2:50 pm
Its one of my rough drafts I can't even remember why I wrote it but thank you
Amiee said...
on Sep. 5 2010 at 4:19 am
wow, cool!
BrokenPuppet said...
on Sep. 4 2010 at 10:48 am
This is short but it gets it's point across. It is well written.
The only thing I would suggest is that you pack more emotion into your words. This poem should be giving off pain...but it was only some words that tried to take the shape of pain.
But...I think this is a good poem. A REALLY good poem. It just needs more emotion. :) Good job
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Sep. 4 2010 at 10:40 am
Lol its ok one of my best friends lives in Korea thanks for the comments:)
Amiee said...
on Sep. 4 2010 at 1:51 am
oh shoot, i forgot this was an english site and wrote korean, really sorry!
Amiee said...
on Sep. 4 2010 at 1:49 am
I LOVE THIS! this is just the style of writing i love! it doesn't excatly have the subject in the poem but instead makes the person think about it, and it's sooo descriptive!
5 of 5! 오점만점에오점!
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Aug. 31 2010 at 10:35 pm
:)
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Aug. 31 2010 at 10:34 pm
Thank you Zavery and no problem you're a good writer:)
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Aug. 25 2010 at 9:24 pm
THANK YOU!!!!!! youre comments are appreciated:)
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Aug. 13 2010 at 8:34 am
Thanx Riley:)
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woah ! i really love this poem . its short and straight to the point .
keep writing this is your gift .