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How We Attack

April 1, 2010
By Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.


Oh look of what has just become.
We fight as one and die as one.
On reason to bleed and many that bleed,
And none that look out when we can’t see.
There’s one that goes down for us all,
And one that takes it from us all.
It’s the inspiration that kills us,
And the perspiration that warns us all.
And when left out on our own-
Well, I guess we’ve been dying all along.
Now I’m dying all on my own,
But I’ve been dying all along.
And now shattered and distraught.
My tears never speak when it’s my fault.
Oh please let us not beg for mercy,
He’ll only come and kill us all.
He’ll leave us dying where we stand.
He’ll leave us waiting while we fall.
This is where the king once fell.
This is where the kingdom will fall.
We fight as one and die as one.
All for one and one for all.
That is how our lord once fell,
That is how our kingdom will fall.



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on Jul. 2 2010 at 9:50 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

I love responses that are impossible to respond to....

on Jul. 2 2010 at 6:34 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

exactly it thats captain.

on Jul. 1 2010 at 11:16 am
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

Yep, so true.  But sometimes it works out like you write something meaningful but slightly dramatic (only slightly) and you show it to someone else, and they turn it into the meanings of the universe, and the depth of the soul and life and death acusations and you're just like.......alrighty then, if that works for you.....

on Jul. 1 2010 at 3:20 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

yeah, and like if they dont get out of it what we put in it then we can just blast them off the cliff side.

on Jun. 30 2010 at 8:28 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

Exactly!  Sometimes I write it as meaningful to me, but so that they can apply it to themselves, as well!

on Jun. 30 2010 at 12:21 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

I just look at it as their own personal deficits.

on Jun. 29 2010 at 1:14 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

Haha, it makes me feel self-conscious, sometimes, like what could other people interpret from my writing?

on Jun. 27 2010 at 12:20 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

welcome to my side of the plasma.

on Jun. 25 2010 at 3:26 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

Haha, I've had that happen before, like when I write something that doesn't mean anything deep, it just sounds that way, and someone interprets this deep meaning for it and I'm like "alright, I guess that's what it's about!"

on Jun. 21 2010 at 3:19 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

i love it when you interpret something correctly and I, as the author come back and say, "oh, so that is what this is about." you help me understand my writing captain. i now reallize the message i was trying to across get.

on Jun. 20 2010 at 12:14 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

I love it when people get it, because a lot of people don't, and it drives me nuts.  I also love it when I interpret something correctly, it makes me feel like a kindred spirit 

on Jun. 20 2010 at 3:03 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

thats exactly it captain. exactly it. maybe i should read it again. that was exactly it. HAHAHAHA!!!! somebody gets it.

on Jun. 11 2010 at 7:32 pm
DreamWriter17 PLATINUM, Marengo, Indiana
34 articles 1 photo 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
learn from your past to live for the future.

I love it, it reminds me, in a sense, of an army poised for battle when they know they will loose, but they're gonna go anyway, because it doesn't matter whether they fight or fall.