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April 1, 2010
By NeverEnding... GOLD, Northeast, Maryland
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NeverEnding... GOLD, Northeast, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;It was as if you had died and no one came to your funeral&quot;<br /> &quot;Whenever i see you i burst apart and scatter the sky with my blazing heart&quot;<br /> &quot;If we can&#039;t be happy, maybe we shouldn&#039;t be together&quot;<br /> &quot;Right and wrong have ceased to mean much to me&quot;

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How can i explain?
Make it go away, the pain
Why must it linger?
Fro my toes down to each finger
My love for you is genuine
Some say 'Tis a sin'
Fix my heart that's been split in two
After you told me you were through
You didn't want to deal with me
Or feel love, because you just can't see
I'll never love another soul
I'll hold onto you and refuse to let go
Again and again you shrug me off
I shed some tears because I'm soft
I don't know what else to do
Because unfortunately,
I remain,
UNCONTROLLABLY
c r a z y
about
Y O U

© Shannon A., Galesburg, IL

The author's comments:
This is the only person i've ever loved and after 5 ish months ive finally gotten over him

THANK GOODNESS! lol
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NeverEnding... GOLD said...
on Jul. 6 2010 at 6:30 am
NeverEnding... GOLD, Northeast, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;It was as if you had died and no one came to your funeral&quot;<br /> &quot;Whenever i see you i burst apart and scatter the sky with my blazing heart&quot;<br /> &quot;If we can&#039;t be happy, maybe we shouldn&#039;t be together&quot;<br /> &quot;Right and wrong have ceased to mean much to me&quot;

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thank you very much :)   i'll remember that
Kristen_Jean GOLD said...
on Jun. 17 2010 at 2:13 pm
Kristen_Jean GOLD, Bloomer, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I walked away,<br /> not because I wanted to leave,<br /> but because I wanted to see if you would try to catch me.<br /> And when you didn&#039;t,<br /> I had the strongest urge to turn around and come back...again.<br /> But I didn&#039;t. <br /> I just kept on walking.&quot;

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i  love it, and remember that if u need to talk im here :)
NeverEnding... GOLD said...
on May. 27 2010 at 8:48 pm
NeverEnding... GOLD, Northeast, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;It was as if you had died and no one came to your funeral&quot;<br /> &quot;Whenever i see you i burst apart and scatter the sky with my blazing heart&quot;<br /> &quot;If we can&#039;t be happy, maybe we shouldn&#039;t be together&quot;<br /> &quot;Right and wrong have ceased to mean much to me&quot;

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ThANK YOU :) thats sweet u 2 saY :) haha
Sarbear GOLD said...
on May. 26 2010 at 12:32 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
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this is sweet! i love the ending... very nice!
NeverEnding... GOLD said...
on May. 24 2010 at 11:44 am
NeverEnding... GOLD, Northeast, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;It was as if you had died and no one came to your funeral&quot;<br /> &quot;Whenever i see you i burst apart and scatter the sky with my blazing heart&quot;<br /> &quot;If we can&#039;t be happy, maybe we shouldn&#039;t be together&quot;<br /> &quot;Right and wrong have ceased to mean much to me&quot;

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Thak you so much!!! :) lol
aliveonink GOLD said...
on May. 21 2010 at 6:22 pm
aliveonink GOLD, Rochester, Minnesota
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wow!this is really good!