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Pay No Attetion To My Puncuation Marks

April 2, 2010
By Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.


This here
was made for you.
And I know that
you’ve probably heard that
a thousand times already,
But this here,
was really made for you.
The punctuation,
Might throw you off.
So pay no attention to it.
The comma
May suggest,
That there’s more to come
But there isn’t.
The question marks,
Will lead you to believe,
That I’ve questioned
My decisions,
But I haven’t.
And the exclamation mark
Might allow you to assume
That I’m happy or excited
But I’m not
And I’m not.
But this sentence here,
this statement right here,
This period right here,
Was designed for you.
So that when you read it,
To yourself,
And to her,
And repeat it,
to yourself,
And to her,
You’ll realize,
That it’s over.



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on May. 13 2010 at 1:32 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

thank you-my eyes are watery.

on May. 12 2010 at 5:19 pm
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
14 articles 0 photos 175 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Biting's excellent. It's like kissing only there's a winner."-Doctor Who, The Tardis

great job!! the flow was great and i especially loved the ending

on May. 10 2010 at 9:06 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

thank you. im glad you like it.

on May. 10 2010 at 8:53 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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And i like how in the the end you finally added the period (like the end).

on May. 10 2010 at 8:52 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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as i was reading your work, i came apon this little master piece Ha!

i love every way you decided to let the puncuation tell the story!

Fantastic!


on May. 10 2010 at 6:57 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

thats like the best comment i ever got. its meaningful, and -well you know. thank you so much for donating a paragraph of your thoughts towards my direction:)

on May. 10 2010 at 6:39 pm
ThatOneWritingGirl PLATINUM, Greenwood Village, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
Don't tell me the sky's the limit when there are footprints on the moon.
Love Always. :)
When the tides of life turn against you and the current upsets your boat, don't waste time and tears on what might have been, just lie on your back and float.

OMG I can't even begin to explain how much I love this piece! It's just plain amazing, I'm like in love with this poem now, no joke! :) It has good rythm, it is totally original, unqiue, stands out, and I LOVE the title! I also really like the last line, brillantly written! It flows so smoothly that you could mistake it for water! :) Truly amazing, you have a really creative and talented mind in your head! Keep writing, I can't wait to read more of your work! THis is awesome!!!

on May. 10 2010 at 4:12 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

"creativeless minds" there we go. thank you.

k.james SILVER said...
on May. 10 2010 at 3:53 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
5 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra

I think people find your stuff hard to relate because sometimes they don't understand your thoughts but that's a good thing because means that your poems have profound depth to them which is sometimes uncomprehendable to the creativless minds.

on May. 10 2010 at 3:42 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

you guys are great. youre like the best feedbackers in the world. cause you actually GIVE FEEDBACK.-you should consider being movie critics-when the poor film directors wanna know what you think-just lie to everyone.

on May. 10 2010 at 1:00 pm
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
14 articles 0 photos 163 comments

Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.

I relate. It was funny. Didn't make me laugh though.... I try not to laugh. I'm getting good at it......jk it was awesome!!!

on May. 9 2010 at 4:28 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

thank you- I'm practicing. I want people to relate to my stuff- rarely ever happens though........:|

on May. 9 2010 at 3:57 pm
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
23 articles 8 photos 98 comments
yer welcome and yes i get it :P ahahahaha

k.james SILVER said...
on May. 9 2010 at 3:50 pm
k.james SILVER, Whitby, Other
5 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love without action is meaningless, action without love is irrelevant." -Deepak Chopra

I LOVE IT!! PLUS IT MADE ME LAUGH, FINALLY SOMEONE CAN DESCRIBE EXACTLY HOW I FEEL :P

on May. 9 2010 at 3:07 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

thank you- I'm glad someone gets it.

on May. 9 2010 at 11:17 am
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

this is awesome. i loved it. very to the point. :) five stars.

on May. 8 2010 at 1:51 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

thank you-that was the point. get it.... the point... HAHAHAHA.

on May. 8 2010 at 12:37 pm
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
23 articles 8 photos 98 comments

I think this is really amazing ,

 you managed to state a point but it turned out beautifully ! Good job


on May. 7 2010 at 4:05 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

thank you-I've been working on my straightforwardness....I must be getting somewhere.

kengx3 GOLD said...
on May. 7 2010 at 3:59 pm
kengx3 GOLD, Ringoes, New Jersey
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I love this. Simple, straightforward, and brilliant.