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I'll tell her
I’ll tell her that she’s beautiful 
 
 I’ll tell her she’s the only one
 
 I’ll tell her that she’s so smart
 
 More radiant than the sun
 
 5
 I’ll tell her that I love her
 
 Because she loves to hear it
 
 I’ll show her that I love her
 
 But I don’t have to cuz she knows it
 
 
 I’ll play her the music
 10
 That always fills my heart
 
 “It reminds me of you” I sing
 
 “And I knew it from the start”
 
 
 I’ll tell her she’s the best
 
 The spark of my fire
 15
 I’ll tell her that she fuels 
 
 The flame of my desire
 
 
 I’ll tell her that I’ll write
 
 To her endlessly
 
 I’ll promise to always call
 20
 To fill her heart with glee
 
 
 
 
 
 I’ll tell her to be happy
 
 And that everything is going to be okay
 
 I’ll comfort her when she’s sad
 
 And make all the bad things go away
 
 25
 I’ll tell her that I need her
 
 That it’ll never be the same
 
 I’ll tell her that I love her too
 
 And that I’m always the one to blame
 
 
 
 I’ll never tell her I hate her
 30
 And I’ll never do her wrong
 
 I just want her approval
 
 All I want is for us to be strong
 
 
 
 I’ll tell her that she’s great
 
 And that she’s a marvelous person
 35
 I’ll tell her she’s the best
 
 Beyond means of deductive reason
 
 
 I’ll tell her I’m so happy
 
 To have her as a friend
 
 But I am even happier 
 40
 That I can love her in the end

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Thanks:)
and I don't mind about the critique, it's helpful, thanks.
yeah, that flows a lot better (the revised stanza that is). To be honest, I'm super annoying with my comments and I search for things to critique on. It's not that I'm trying to be mean, I just really want to help people make their work better. Cuz I like when people do that with mine.
I really like the meaning of this poem to.... obviously... ;)
haha
I read it for my poetry slam:) didn't win but everyone loved it haha
yeah i'm a guy and i'm single;) lol
yeahhh...
the new version is
I’ll tell her that I love her
Because it’s what she loves to hear
I’ll show her that I love her
And tell her that I always need her near