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Who 2?

April 8, 2010
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"


There’s a girl that I loved once


Her name is not well known


At last I got her to love me too


Loved me she did

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In many beautiful ways


At last my patience pays


Beautiful like the moon


Radiant like the sun


Intense eyes that show all

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Great music filled her heart


Heaven’s angels all envied



This girl that I adored

The author's comments:
more recent one kind of easy to figure out my who poems

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on May. 11 2010 at 8:17 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

look on my profile  it's there

on May. 9 2010 at 3:50 pm
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
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sorry i don't know why i said that i was meaning where's "Who 1"

on May. 7 2010 at 10:49 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
48 articles 0 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

?? where's ghost one???

on May. 6 2010 at 5:42 am
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
59 articles 2 photos 88 comments
where's ghost one. Another sweet poem