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April 11, 2010
By jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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It comes
It goes
It Toos
It Fros

It leaves
It stays
It Decembers
It Mays

It never comes back
It forgets your name
It leaves no note
Like it never even came



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Sethb said...
on May. 29 2010 at 8:21 pm
Me too that one was best

sethB said...
on May. 29 2010 at 8:20 pm
This one i can relate too!

on May. 29 2010 at 8:19 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
11 articles 0 photos 87 comments
Ill check out your stuff!

on May. 10 2010 at 8:58 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

Thanks!!! I just love writing!!! so amazing!!! I hope that i am talented

on May. 10 2010 at 8:56 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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I will, i bet its good! you seem like

you'd be really talented by all the

excitement you have for writing!!


on May. 10 2010 at 8:27 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
11 articles 0 photos 87 comments
everything that you just said was the exactly the kinda comment i was looking for and needed! This was just a simple poem on the surface but with a deeper meaning and it looks like you got that!

on May. 10 2010 at 8:19 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

I like this one because instead of skipping fifty lines between stanzas and leaving sensless fragment sentences like"love.its good. its bad. it hurts." you gave us something we can actually enjoy. thats a true deviation from the norm   5 stars. this is incrediblism speaking to us all......

on May. 10 2010 at 8:16 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

thanks you too!! i just wrote this poem today and submitted it-called Wait for Tomorrow-you should check that out first!!

on May. 10 2010 at 8:13 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
11 articles 0 photos 87 comments
Keep writing!(:

on May. 10 2010 at 7:54 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

That means so much that you don't even no-thank you!!!

on May. 10 2010 at 7:49 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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I can't wait took look at your work!

on May. 10 2010 at 7:44 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

I don't lie!!!!

on May. 10 2010 at 7:44 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
11 articles 0 photos 87 comments

Aww thanks mee too!

it gives me the chills!


on May. 10 2010 at 7:43 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
11 articles 0 photos 87 comments
awwww thankksss sooo muchh!!(:

on May. 10 2010 at 7:42 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
11 articles 0 photos 87 comments

me too!ahah

it gives meee the chills


on May. 10 2010 at 7:42 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
11 articles 0 photos 87 comments
thanks girly!

on May. 10 2010 at 7:36 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 501 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

I like this one too!!! Very creative!!

on May. 10 2010 at 12:31 pm
timevampire GOLD, Bellville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Quoting yourself makes you an ass.

I love the last four lines.

Bianca said...
on May. 8 2010 at 1:14 pm
I really like this one too!