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to my sweet mother

April 8, 2010
By sancia BRONZE, Trivandrum, Other
sancia BRONZE, Trivandrum, Other
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i love u, u love me, we love each other.....:)


To My Sweet Mother………

When I am alone, she is with me
But I don’t feel her presence
When I hate myself, she advices me
But my ears will be closed
When I feel my love rejected by others,
She comes and tells me
“I am there to accept your love”
But I won’t listen to her words


But she cares for me when I am alone
And console me when I am sad
And dies when I cry…………..
But now she is not with me
I want her love, I need her
Presence and her consoling
Words and want to
Hold her arm and walk
In beautiful sunset….

She is no one else but
My sweet mother
Who is always with me
Cares me and dies when I cry,
I love u mother
You are the precious
Gem in the world, no one
Else can ever replace for you

Be with me like an
Everlasting shining gem
In my sadness, happiness
Lead me through
the right Path like a
Lamp giving its light
in a dark forest
You are the bearer of light,
I miss u mother


The author's comments:
this poem is about my mother.

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on Jul. 3 2011 at 10:58 am
SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
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Some truths best left unspoken.

I don't know whether that response was suposed to be sarcastic or sierious, but your welcom.

sancia BRONZE said...
on Jul. 3 2011 at 12:36 am
sancia BRONZE, Trivandrum, Other
2 articles 1 photo 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
i love u, u love me, we love each other.....:)

thank u :)

on Jul. 2 2011 at 2:16 pm
SMWells PLATINUM, Carlisle, South Carolina
22 articles 0 photos 294 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some truths best left unspoken.

That's kind of sweet, but think the formatting is a little off. No affence though, mine normily is to.