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Heart Break
April 20, 2010
Heart break
I feel so cold; and empty
Your touch was the warmth of me,
Disappearing slowly; as I fade away.
Memories glow like fire flies at night,
Never ever leaving my sight; forever.
You touched me; like an angel from above,
Brightening me; with each and every hug.
The tears slowly trickle down the side,
It’s noticeable; with no way to hide it.
I stay quiet; hoping no one will ask,
See this smile, it’s only fake.
Feelings grow; but quickly decrease.
You left me lifeless; with no room to breath.
There’s no fix; to this horrifying pain.
The more aches; the more breaks,
And I’m all alone; maintaining this heart break.
© Nik F., Clarkston, MI
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This article has 23 comments.
shortiee said...
on May. 17 2011 at 5:51 pm
I just loved this poem because this is how i feel right now u did a really good job with this poem !
Army.Strong SILVER said...
on May. 12 2010 at 4:54 pm
this is amazing. I love every bit of it. :)
inspire.identity. PLATINUM said...
on May. 11 2010 at 9:33 pm
i love this !
mysterywriter11 GOLD said...
on May. 11 2010 at 7:25 pm
i can totally relate ;)
phillies26 said...
on May. 11 2010 at 2:22 pm
that was soooo good n i can relate to this cuz i had my heart broken 4 times already!!!! HUH...... :( but hey life goes on right?
sad_gurl said...
on May. 11 2010 at 1:37 pm
i can definatley relate to this if u colud ever write what somone could feel when goin through crap u did! great job!
ashleykayy. BRONZE said...
on May. 10 2010 at 9:42 pm
if someone could capture a heart break in words this would describe the feelings :) keep writing.
HelloLove said...
on May. 10 2010 at 4:02 pm
Very well written, So deep.
I<3Him4everK+C said...
on May. 10 2010 at 12:14 pm
wow this poem was really good i liked it two thumbs up :)
Valerie1234 GOLD said...
on May. 10 2010 at 12:04 pm
This is realllyy GOOD! I love it! I know that exact feeling, although i've moved on from that guy who broke my heart a million times, and am with a different great guy. I know this feeling and it really sucks...But this is a beautiful poem! i also right poetry, kinda about the same things.
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on May. 9 2010 at 8:54 pm
exactly!! i could feel the emotion and thought that you put behind it. Beautiful!!!
sammie1997 GOLD said...
on May. 8 2010 at 11:38 pm
I feel exactly that way RIGHT now! it sucks... ur poem describes the feelings so well... it is almost scary! please if u have some time check out my poems and leave a comment to something i can do better to make mine awesome like yours is!
weepingwillowfaire GOLD said...
on May. 8 2010 at 11:33 pm
i love ur poem it also shows how i feel there is so much emostions in it.
PoetryLovesMe said...
on May. 8 2010 at 6:41 pm
oh my gosh this is exactly what i feel like its is beautifully written and you did a great job.. :)
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD said...
on May. 8 2010 at 1:01 pm
This is so touching, and really well-written.(:
