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Darkness Ever Pressing

April 19, 2010
By Karma_Crow PLATINUM, Savannah, Georgia
Karma_Crow PLATINUM, Savannah, Georgia
48 articles 1 photo 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Behold thy sorrow of the tears that streak down our cheek and made upon of what he is. Behold our sorrow that we hold within us. Show ye thee of the how we feel of each of us."- Lestat

I've been left
With my thoughts
Too long
I can't escape
The pure essence
Of memories
how a desire
For an escape
Of this
Lifeless hope
What's wrong
With me?
I had the
Perfect life
By my eyes
I had
I need it
To survive
For once I
Was happy
But now
That's stripped
From me
THis darkness
Ever creeping
The tears
Won't stop
The flow
As a river
A river
Of self-pity
What's wrong
With me?
By darkness
The feling
Of losness
The happiness
Have left
My body
Is the desire
To resist
Ever movement
Only brings me lower
Oh what is
Wrong with me?
I feel
So at lost
And alone
I fear
I will lose
Him, my dearest
To this ever
Of my
What am I
To do of
My Depression?

The author's comments:
These thoughts have come to mind over and over and now I have chosen to write them, to express myself. Hopefully it will help.

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on May. 12 2010 at 12:45 pm
.Escape.From.This.Afterlife. GOLD, Short Hills, New Jersey
10 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"bad blood is more satisfying to spill across the floor..."

I love the way your pieces are laid out, the way the poem snakes down the page, two or three words at a time.  Nice work, the emotion is very strong!