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I Threw You My Heart

April 19, 2010
By JourneyWriter PLATINUM, Joliet, Illinois
JourneyWriter PLATINUM, Joliet, Illinois
21 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I-
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference.

-Robert Frost


I threw you my heart
You dropped it
And it broke
I didn’t think that that would happen
But it did
I saw it
My heart shattered on the concrete
You didn’t think twice
Before you let it slip from your fingers
It was a hard fall
And it hurt
So what can I do now
That my heart is broken?
I blame myself
But you’re the one responsible for the breaking
Maybe you should think again before you hurt another
Like that again



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on Feb. 3 2011 at 4:38 pm
artistinda_lonelily SILVER, Joliet, Illinois
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good job :) this makes me sad. i wrote one similar to this one... you should read it! i love your work!

on Jun. 6 2010 at 3:36 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

i don't know you i just saw that someone called u molly...but i like ur work anyways-check out some of mine!!

on Jun. 1 2010 at 6:52 pm
JourneyWriter PLATINUM, Joliet, Illinois
21 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I-
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference.

-Robert Frost

hey, so im trying to figure out how i know you.....? sry, but i can't place ya, could you give me a hint...? thanks for the  comment! :D

on May. 17 2010 at 11:57 pm
fusrodahsaraaa GOLD, Albany, Other
16 articles 5 photos 47 comments
Wow this touched my 'Heart' lol. You are a creative and imaginitive writer. I enjoy reading your work. XX

rosegrink said...
on May. 13 2010 at 10:31 am

This is amzing! I love it! I love the things you write.

Keep me posted! :)


on May. 13 2010 at 1:42 am

"maybe you should thing again before you hurt another like that again"

this line spoke a lot to me. relates to a difficult experience


on May. 12 2010 at 4:19 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

(molly?...) i love this poem-you wrote it in such a new way for such a used subject-awesome job

truthseeker said...
on May. 12 2010 at 11:25 am
Molly, you have ventured further than I ever imagined you would with poetry! I am proud of you. Kudos!