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The voices

April 21, 2010
By faypirate23 DIAMOND, Fayetteville, West Virginia
faypirate23 DIAMOND, Fayetteville, West Virginia
61 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
Take the road less traveled by.


All my life I've heard the voices say you can't do this and you can't do that.
All my life I've been shut away in a dark place by the voices telling me to give up.
All my life I heard the voices say you can't succeed you won't.
But I still dream and hope and wish and pray that someday I'll rise above everything and conquer my dreams of becoming someone,something.
Not just a name in the crowd,but a name that stands out.
That shines brighter than the first star in the night sky.
Who says I can't dream.
Who says I can't be the person I strive to be.
No one does.
The voices are unclear now.
Their silence is justified by my well being and confidence in life.
New doors are opening,old doors are closing.
Shutting on the voices who told me to give up.
I will never give up.
As long as my heart is still beating,my eyes still see, and my voice is still heard.
I will be unstoppable.
A force of love,heart,and strength.
My voice will be louder than the others.
My voice shall overcome defeat.
My voice will be heard above all others.


The author's comments:
I wrote this as it came to me. Its about listening to the positive voices inside you not the negative.

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on May. 24 2010 at 10:03 pm
faypirate23 DIAMOND, Fayetteville, West Virginia
61 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
Take the road less traveled by.

hahah yes lets ;p

Sarbear GOLD said...
on May. 21 2010 at 8:13 pm
Sarbear GOLD, Milan, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
--Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way, when you criticize them, you're a mile away from them and you have their shoes.
--When life gives you lemons, squirt them in people's eyes.

this is rlly powerful and i love the conclusion... great job once again :)

on May. 20 2010 at 8:48 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

lets dance and be special together.

no, thats not what I meant......


on May. 20 2010 at 2:32 pm
faypirate23 DIAMOND, Fayetteville, West Virginia
61 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
Take the road less traveled by.

AWW i feel rlly special ty for that haha and im dancing to sean paul right now in happiness

on May. 19 2010 at 8:02 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

youre the best. i love you, but not really, but yeah kind of. if i ever heard your words in person i would kneel at the oppurtunity to digest and my mouth would water at the scent of their nothingness.

on May. 19 2010 at 5:44 pm
faypirate23 DIAMOND, Fayetteville, West Virginia
61 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
Take the road less traveled by.

no ive never actually seized anybody thats one of my life goals though im getting to it but i like sean paul too! he is amazingg

on May. 19 2010 at 5:02 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

right, but you havent exactly seized anybody?......

on May. 19 2010 at 2:40 pm
faypirate23 DIAMOND, Fayetteville, West Virginia
61 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
Take the road less traveled by.

im rlly a pirate too lol! well thats my school mascot

on May. 19 2010 at 8:30 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

oui oui captain.

on May. 18 2010 at 4:15 pm
faypirate23 DIAMOND, Fayetteville, West Virginia
61 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
Take the road less traveled by.

woah ty so much this is what i feel

on May. 17 2010 at 9:52 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

I love this. it gives a feeling of triumph like you will prevail and everybody else can just go away. 5 stars captain.