Closer, | Teen Ink


April 14, 2010
By ResistMe PLATINUM, New Tazewell, Tennessee
ResistMe PLATINUM, New Tazewell, Tennessee
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You always told me,

F o r e v e r,

I s a r o u g h p l a c e...
I always believed that

I o n l y w a n t e d,
One thing,in my world.

O n e m o r e t a s t e..
Would be too long of a drink.

To be hurt and held,
higher and higher,
before the ice climbs,

O n e b i t t e r s i p,

A n d y o u l o s e y o u r b a l a n c e.

It's comforting,
You know they'll stay.
But,when they've found what you've hidden,

W h o r e a l l y o p e n e d t h a t d o o r?

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on May. 23 2010 at 6:58 pm
Sarah32196 BRONZE, Glendale, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
The Irony Of Life Is That The Moment You Feel The Most Alive, Is The Moment You're About To Die.

this is such a good poem. all of your writing is amazing. if you dont mind, would you read and possibly comment a few peices of my writing?(: