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The Voice of a Beach

April 2, 2010
By J.C.Evans GOLD, Westland, Michigan
J.C.Evans GOLD, Westland, Michigan
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The tranquil water starts to mutter
A beautiful melody,
As I stroll along the peaceful beach
And admire the rippling sea.
The sun releases golden rays
As it bows away for the night,
The reflection dances across the water
Creating an exquisite sight.
A crisp wind rushes across my skin
While I listen to the rustling breeze,
It begins to reveal a story
As it sweetly sings with ease.
As the darkening night draws near
I can hear the billowing sea cry,
The sound calms my mind and soul
Just like a soothing lullaby...


The author's comments:
Just a moment in time, where nature comes alive...

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J.C.Evans GOLD said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 5:07 pm
J.C.Evans GOLD, Westland, Michigan
14 articles 50 photos 53 comments
Thank you so much:)

on Jun. 29 2010 at 4:55 pm
haventy0uheard PLATINUM, Kings Park, New York
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this is amazingly beautiful! i loved the imagery and i love the beach so i really enjoyed this:) check out my work if you want

J.C.Evans GOLD said...
on May. 20 2010 at 7:46 pm
J.C.Evans GOLD, Westland, Michigan
14 articles 50 photos 53 comments

Awe thank u so much:) I truly appreciate the comment:) n I will def check out ur poem:)

 


on May. 19 2010 at 10:26 am
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

Wow i love this! I love the beach and this is a great creative discription about it! Please check out my new poem Memories and rate it and let me no wat you think =)