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My Crush <333

April 30, 2010
By KelleySchorn SILVER, Fort Worth, Texas
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Whatever you are be a good one-some president i dont remember which<br /> procrastinaters unite!...tomorrow!!-matt<br /> i&#039;m F-U-L-LLLLL i think i can spellllll-allie =]

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I see your bleach blonde hair,
Glaring in the sun,
You glance my way,
You make me blush,
Who could you be?
Who could you be but my crush?

© Lauren N., Denton, TX

The author's comments:
This is about my current crush, I've been writing a lot of poems about him recently...this is my first poem that i entered on here so please comment.
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KelleySchorn SILVER said...
on Jun. 15 2010 at 11:31 am
KelleySchorn SILVER, Fort Worth, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whatever you are be a good one-some president i dont remember which<br /> procrastinaters unite!...tomorrow!!-matt<br /> i&#039;m F-U-L-LLLLL i think i can spellllll-allie =]

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thanks for commenting im glad you liked it.
Saphe SILVER said...
on Jun. 7 2010 at 11:45 am
Saphe SILVER, Kansas City, Missouri
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If you would not be forgotten, as soon as you are dead and rotten, either write things worth the reading, or do things worth the writing. -Ben Franklin

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It's short and sweet, but how much needs to be said about crushes? It's very good, and it sums everything up in a way many can relate to. I know I can. :)
katie-cat GOLD said...
on Jun. 7 2010 at 6:20 am
katie-cat GOLD, McClellandtown, Pennsylvania
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&quot;Look after my heart, I&#039;ve left it with you.&quot;- Edward Cullen<br /> &quot;To love another person is to see the face of God . . .&quot;- Les Miserables<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t say the old lady screamed. Bring her out and let her scream.&quot; - Mark Twain

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This is cute, I can tell you have talent.  It's a little short, and needs a lot more to it, but I think it'll be a good one :)
KelleySchorn SILVER said...
on May. 31 2010 at 7:08 pm
KelleySchorn SILVER, Fort Worth, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whatever you are be a good one-some president i dont remember which<br /> procrastinaters unite!...tomorrow!!-matt<br /> i&#039;m F-U-L-LLLLL i think i can spellllll-allie =]

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thanks and yeah there could have been a few more lines but that was all that came to me in science class at that time :P
Snow_White said...
on May. 31 2010 at 1:49 am
This is ok...i think there could be more to it...like a few more lines or somthing but i stilll like it! :)
KelleySchorn SILVER said...
on May. 28 2010 at 11:26 am
KelleySchorn SILVER, Fort Worth, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whatever you are be a good one-some president i dont remember which<br /> procrastinaters unite!...tomorrow!!-matt<br /> i&#039;m F-U-L-LLLLL i think i can spellllll-allie =]

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thanks for commenting im just waiting for some of my stuff to get out of the "pending" stage. :)

 

 

Eilatan GOLD said...
on May. 26 2010 at 3:53 pm
Eilatan GOLD, Old Greenwich, Connecticut
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This is very interesting, i like that it's short and i think that a lot of people (although maybe not me) can connect to what you're saying. keep writing, you have potential!

also if you could check out some of my stuff that'd be great. my poems are short too, don't worry : )