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From Out Of The Gloom

April 27, 2010
By Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.


I found myself in a dark empty room,
-The doors sealed and the curtains drawn-
trembling in the corner with a broken bulb,
That was casting shadows on the wall.

Each of the windows had their own face,
through the wooden boards they’d speak.
Each one had warned her not to stay,
And made it so that she couldn’t leave.

Every single night was a restless night,
For the figures lurking in the gloom.
Some of the floor tiles would awake,
And silently creep across the room.

For her this had become too much,
She needed someone with whom to talk.
Her and I had become really close,
By means of a mirror on the wall.

While she helped me reconcile with myself,
I helped her recover from her mental fall.
So she honored me with a broken light,
That was casting shadows on the wall.


The author's comments:
good old classic hallucination.

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. said...
on Sep. 26 2011 at 10:45 am
Right..........uh huh...

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Sep. 25 2011 at 11:05 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

Seriously, and my mother doesn't want me on teen ink anymore(she says I'm too addicted and that I need to focus on school more) so it's getting harder and harder to get on here.

. said...
on Sep. 25 2011 at 10:27 pm
Right...right....

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Sep. 24 2011 at 4:27 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

With all that stuff, now I'm super-busy. :)

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Sep. 24 2011 at 4:26 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

Well, I'm not bored anymore. :) Just started high school(homework, tons of friends and Theatre) plus after-school stuff and track.

on Sep. 22 2011 at 11:49 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

that is the funniest thing I ever heard you say

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Aug. 3 2011 at 1:31 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

You're welcome! But I am very bored these days so it's not much of a favor...

on Aug. 2 2011 at 10:33 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

hmm...no ghosts intended. oh no, never that. YOURE SO AWESOME CAPTAIN.  i am loving tat you time the take to commentate.

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 5:27 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
11 articles 0 photos 897 comments

Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

This is a beautiful poem about nights and darkness.

LOVE IT! And with my fascination for night and ghosts...etc, I could almost relate to it! 

And for some reason, the purpleness of the picture really goes with the poem.

Nice job. :) 

 

 


on Sep. 14 2010 at 2:18 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

*idea

maybe you should try to make typos. maybe then, you'd be a hero

....captain.


on Sep. 13 2010 at 9:08 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

*thought

hmm the more i try to fix my typos and all the more mistakes i make so i'll just leave everything as it is ;]


on Sep. 13 2010 at 9:06 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

*correction: sorry i though u asked me if i dance lol

on Sep. 13 2010 at 9:05 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

sorry i thought u said asked me if i dance lol

on Sep. 13 2010 at 9:04 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

xD xD xD xD

on Sep. 11 2010 at 7:56 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

oh....I see. sure.....we'll go with that.....yep...sure......how about that.....

on Sep. 11 2010 at 7:43 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

do I !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i was considering becoming a choreographer or something like that


on Sep. 8 2010 at 11:46 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

as a matter of random fact, i really do apprecialove your commentism captain. do your dance.

on Sep. 8 2010 at 6:50 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

its okay dude ;]

on Sep. 8 2010 at 6:49 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

lol xD ;] =] :p

on Sep. 7 2010 at 7:05 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

merci captain. you know, i lke the idea of a raven on timevampires shoulder.I wish I could mimic your stlye to emphasize my gratitude, but I dont think I could come back three times...