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The unfinished story MAG

April 15, 2010
By kiewanna sajna GOLD, San Diego, California
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There once was a girl
Who was stuck in a mind
Where everything wasn't finished
With a half sun that once shined
Cars with no wheels
Chairs with no seats

And meat halfway done
That smelled like feet
Flowers were dead

Clouds were gray

The girl was miserable
As night turned to day
Then things began to change
Everything became whole
All the happiness

Fills everyone's soul

Flowers were blooming

And smiles as bright as the sun
Now the unfinished story
Was finally

© Morgan C., Fridley, MN

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I inspired by reading books with an opened ending were it could be anything
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ToPonJah DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 1 2011 at 5:01 pm
ToPonJah DIAMOND, San Diego, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;So shines a good deed , in a weary world.&quot; -William Shakespeare<br /> &quot;I don&#039;t know...&quot; -Bill Cosby<br /> &quot;STOMP, STOMP, SLAM!!!&quot; -George Lopez

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Ohh, your welcome! No one ever reads mine soo I just make up the comments for myself! I know! Sad, Right?
kiewanna sajna GOLD said...
on May. 12 2011 at 4:44 pm
kiewanna sajna GOLD, San Diego, California
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Thanks for the comment
kiewanna sajna GOLD said...
on May. 12 2011 at 4:43 pm
kiewanna sajna GOLD, San Diego, California
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Thanks for the comment
kiewanna sajna GOLD said...
on May. 12 2011 at 4:43 pm
kiewanna sajna GOLD, San Diego, California
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Thanks for the comment
carilloony GOLD said...
on Feb. 12 2011 at 2:43 pm
carilloony GOLD, Sterling, Virginia
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&quot;To love another person is to see the face of God.&quot;

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This is really great, I liked it. :)
ToPonJah DIAMOND said...
on Feb. 5 2011 at 1:31 am
ToPonJah DIAMOND, San Diego, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;So shines a good deed , in a weary world.&quot; -William Shakespeare<br /> &quot;I don&#039;t know...&quot; -Bill Cosby<br /> &quot;STOMP, STOMP, SLAM!!!&quot; -George Lopez

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Dude, this sounds a lot like my life. Nothing ever gets done, sentences never finished, it's just crazy, nothing is EVER finished! So i like this poem a lot. I love the ending, my mom thought it was kinda sad thogh...
beautiie said...
on Feb. 4 2011 at 5:36 pm
beautiie, St.louis, Missouri
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I.TRUST.NO.ONE.BUT.ME

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uhm i really like this.. its creative!!!