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Make Me Believe

May 4, 2010
By maRAWR GOLD, Greeley, Colorado
maRAWR GOLD, Greeley, Colorado
14 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
"all you need is love" -the beatles =)


Say it again.
Tell me how much you love me.
Tell me everything you want to
Do for me,
Do with me,
Do to me.
Tell me where our mansion will be,
And what we’ll see from the view of our newly remodeled balcony.
Tell me the kind of sports car I’ll drive
To pick up our little angels from the nanny.
Tell me we can spend eternity together.
Make me fall for it~
Make me fall for you.
Make me believe we can live in bliss,
That this isn’t how it has to be.
Tell me this is just how it seems.

We dream about designer clothes,
Exotic wines, and
Canopy beds, but instead
We wake up daily to
Sinking cheeks,
A roof full of leaks,
Kids fed only stale bread for weeks.
We’ve loved each other until our hearts have bled,
But now, whatever we had is dead.
And although I dread hearing your voice,
I want you to make me see the world I want to live in.
Make me believe I can break free from this reality.

Say it again.
Tell me how much you love me.

The author's comments:
The most depressing thing in this world is watching two people falling out of love.

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maRAWR GOLD said...
on May. 28 2010 at 12:49 pm
maRAWR GOLD, Greeley, Colorado
14 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
"all you need is love" -the beatles =)

thanks! i always appreciate advice. your comment actually made me realize just how much of a steady beat the poem had to it- that actually wasn't intentional haha.  i look forward to reading your work! =)

on May. 24 2010 at 7:43 pm
SassyJones GOLD, Los Altos Hills, California
13 articles 5 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We make our fourtunes, and we call them fate" earl of beaconsville.

Really good. A bit of constructive criticism- every thing is in beat until you said, " I want you to make me see the world I want to live in,.i had to read it over a few times to understand it. please check out my work too!