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May 4, 2010
By chartothalatte GOLD, Cleveland Heights, Ohio
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your scruffy blonde hair
with your bright blue eyes
you might sound flawless
but i know your imperfection

you always have my back
and you don’t tell my secrets
that personality of yours
isn’t one that i might forget

you were my closest friend
and you almost became more
but then we made a mistake
and we were no more

there is still a part of me
that cannot forgive you
a part of me that can’t forget
and cannot accept your apology

but when i ignore that part
the part that tells me no
i know you’re still part of me
and that your still my best friend

© Megan S., Marblehead, MA

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this is about something that happened with my best friend. were past it, but i can't forget it.
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_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Jul. 9 2010 at 10:36 am
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
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- I stare danger in the face and giggle<br /> - Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference<br /> -R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)<br /> -Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

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wow that is a great poem 5/5. i hope to check out more of your stuff.

btw-can you check out some of my stuff?

chartothalatte GOLD said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 7:43 pm
chartothalatte GOLD, Cleveland Heights, Ohio
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thanks! i will!
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 8:00 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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great job!!! this is sooooo good and i would love it if you checked out some of my work!!!!
chartothalatte GOLD said...
on Jun. 7 2010 at 8:42 pm
chartothalatte GOLD, Cleveland Heights, Ohio
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he's a guy.

read here for a bit more back ground: TeenInk.com/nonfiction/personal_experience/article/217202/Always/

wishicoulddeletemyaccount BRONZE said...
on Jun. 6 2010 at 5:45 pm
wishicoulddeletemyaccount BRONZE, Saint Louis, Missouri
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I'm glad you guys got over it. Best friend fights are the worst. Just out of curiosity, is this best friend a girl or a boy?