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April 28, 2010
By BeloveD SILVER, Gretna, Nebraska
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BeloveD SILVER, Gretna, Nebraska
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If you love something, let it be. If it doesn't come back to you, it was never ment to be.

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Night falls over Earth,
The moon hangs low in the sky,
Silently I dream.

I dream of my love,
How he holds me so tightly,
And never lets go.

His strong face I see,
Under the moonlight we dance,
Our feet glide on air.

His thin lips meet mine,
I wish this moment would last,
But it goes away.

We stand there breathless,
Taking in our surroundings,
He starts to smile.

I love you darling,
He whispers in my cold ear,
Always stay with me.

I slowly wake up,
Reality hits me hard,
For he is not there.

I long to see him,
But he is just an image,
Meant for someone else.

Sadly not for me,
A warm tear rolls down my cheek,
Only in my dreams.

© Mary Claire J., Wichita Falls, TX

The author's comments:
This poem is a haiku with mutiple stanza's. I wasn't sure what to classify it as, so i just put it under free verse :) i hope you guys like it. Oh, and this is my first poem on here so please comment!
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Sileron-evol PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 30 2010 at 1:20 pm
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
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Heres the link too all my work, http:// TeenInk.com/users/Dominicangirl
Sileron-evol PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 30 2010 at 1:15 pm
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
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I'll just send you a link too all my work, hope it works. :)

TeenInk.com/users/Dominicangirl

 

BeloveD SILVER said...
on Jun. 27 2010 at 1:06 am
BeloveD SILVER, Gretna, Nebraska
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hey i cant find the stories you told me to read.... what would i find it under?
Sileron-evol PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 6 2010 at 7:30 pm
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
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Loll haha thts funnyy! & thnkks
BeloveD SILVER said...
on Jun. 4 2010 at 9:18 pm
BeloveD SILVER, Gretna, Nebraska
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If you love something, let it be. If it doesn&#039;t come back to you, it was never ment to be.

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thanks :) i have two more poems on the way if you really liked these. one i accidently put the poem in the comment spot and the comment in the poem spot. but oh well. ill read yours :)
Sileron-evol PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 2 2010 at 6:58 pm
Sileron-evol PLATINUM, Providence, Rhode Island
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Wow its crazy how i can relate to this piece........

I loved iht!! please read Mystery Guy, and/or Mystery guy part 2. Thanks :)