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I once was

May 10, 2010
By Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

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I once was a young girl, with an open mind,
Everything I did, was ever so kind.
I once was a mismatched girl, dressed by my mom,
Exploded on me, was a colorful bomb.
I once was a playful girl, with ideas of the sky,
I could swing and climb, hours passing by.
I once was a fearless girl, wanting to do everything,
Never needing to cover up, under someone’s wing.
I was once a different girl, so far from who I am today,
Following my heart, every step of the way!

© Adria O., Edgewood, WA

The author's comments:
This just tells a little bit about how i've changed, like everyone has from thier childhood to when they are finding theirselves in their early teen years.
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Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 10:30 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

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Thankyou so much!!! It means a lot. I just submitted three more poems, two minutes ago so come back and check them out in three weeks!!! THanks again and i hope that you will look at some of my other work!!!
Kelli_2011 DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 10:17 am
Kelli_2011 DIAMOND, Fillmore, California
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this too shall pass

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i love it i can relate keep it up !!! no really keep it up!!!
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 7:40 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

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thankyou so much!!! I'll never let it go!!! and for you -never change your name-cause we all know its the best name ever!!!
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 7:39 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
14 articles 0 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

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that's so nice!!! thankyou
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD said...
on Jun. 15 2010 at 10:11 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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ok sure, but this one might still be my fav...(: we'll see
lexygirl3 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 15 2010 at 8:33 pm
lexygirl3 BRONZE, Saint Peters, Missouri
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"When you are in Love you can't fall asleep because reality is better than your dreams."
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i really like this poem. its ppretty dang good. keep up the writting and never let the things that inspire u leave ur heart
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on Jun. 14 2010 at 9:17 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

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thank you so much that means alot!!! Please check out some more of my work i think you'd like my other poems called 'a girl with a little ocd' and stay for tomorrow
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD said...
on Jun. 12 2010 at 3:25 am
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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AWW oh look! this is sooo goood! its really adorable yet mature.! good job this one is my favorite! i love this
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on Jun. 6 2010 at 3:34 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

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thanks so much!!
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 3 2010 at 3:50 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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this is absolutely amazing. keep up the amazing work!! :)