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Paper & Plastic

May 12, 2010
By Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

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I used to have a paper heart
That I would wear on my sleeve
You ripped it off, crumpled it up
You made your choice to leave

So I made another heart
I kept it hidden and strong
Until i gave it away again
My decision turned out wrong

Now you walk in, acting cool
Your ego radiating off your
Hollister shirt
Sure you're cute and sweet
like Splenda
But I know your type you lying flirt

I've had my heart torn, thrown, forgotten
You think I'll come back to you like stretched elastic
You think my heart is still made of paper
Well guess what boy, it's Plastic

© Liaz M., Vineland, NJ

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Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 11:58 am
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

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Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

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Thanks cookies star:)
cookiestar said...
on Jan. 17 2012 at 8:17 am
Wow, this is amazing, unique, love the imagery:). I love this poem. Good job!
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Jan. 16 2012 at 2:27 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

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I know it seems that way but it should only be four lines when I submitted it it came out as six so the beat is off
Smile-And-Wave-Boys. SILVER said...
on Jan. 16 2012 at 11:29 am
Smile-And-Wave-Boys. SILVER, Rotherhithe, Other
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&quot;Everyone wants to ride with you in the limo, but what you want is someone who will take the bus with you when the limo breaks down.&quot; <br /> &mdash; Oprah Winfrey

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I really like this poem, you really sense the emotion and truth behind the poem, and I love the metaphors :) Although, the third stanza seems a bit off, but that's just my opinion. Overall, great job!
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 10:36 am
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

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Thank you Jacob:) This is one of my favorites
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 1:57 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
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&quot;And when I&#039;m gone, just carry on, don&#039;t mourn<br /> Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice<br /> Just know that I&#039;m looking down on you smiling<br /> And I didn&#039;t feel a thing, So baby don&#039;t feel my pain<br /> Just smile back&quot;-Eminem

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I need to read your stuff more often.  This is... epic.
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 12:00 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Thanks Animacordis:)
AnimaCordis GOLD said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 11:56 am
AnimaCordis GOLD, London, Other
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I really, really love this! 

Your imagery here is great, I love your shakesperian refrences.  I love the idea of a paper heart then a plastic heart. This is really, really good. It's clever, well written, orginal and sort of funny! XD

Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Dec. 25 2010 at 7:12 pm
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Thank you Healing Angel:)
Healing_Angel SILVER said...
on Dec. 6 2010 at 12:26 am
Healing_Angel SILVER, Sydney, Other
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Nice work! Love the last sentence, it's brilliant! :) Love the flow and imagery. The emotion is good too! Well done and keep writing.  
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Oct. 21 2010 at 10:09 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

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Thank you sooooo much!!! and of course I will if I don't by tuesday please remind me:)
kmarie14 PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 18 2010 at 9:35 pm
kmarie14 PLATINUM, Hyrum, Utah
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love love love love this! (; i love the paper plastic thing its great :) ahhh :) this is magazine worthy(: thanks for posting and keep writing! :) check out my work and comment?
SamiLynn PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 21 2010 at 11:34 pm
SamiLynn PLATINUM, Anthem, Arizona
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haha thats fine :)
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Sep. 21 2010 at 10:04 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

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Ha thanx:) I don't have too much time right now but I promise to comment and rate on all your work tomorrow:)
SamiLynn PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 19 2010 at 11:36 pm
SamiLynn PLATINUM, Anthem, Arizona
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ooo this is awesome and kinda sassy :) u showed him :D
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Sep. 4 2010 at 10:37 am
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

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lol thanx:)
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 3 2010 at 11:39 pm
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
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whoo you go girl!
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Aug. 13 2010 at 7:15 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

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Thank you everyone for the comments and ratings:)
InsaneKitten BRONZE said...
on Aug. 13 2010 at 10:14 am
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This is really cute and emotional at the same time and at the end I kind of broke out into laughter :3 this is awesome :D
mudpuppy BRONZE said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 6:45 pm
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Oh, but the poem was cute.